WRITER 2 WRITER: HOW TO WRITE A REAL PAGE-TURNER, PART 3

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*  Write a Real Page-Turner, Part I
*  Write a Real Page-Turner, Part II


In Part One, I defined what being a Page-Turner is and why writers should seriously consider writing one. In Part Two I shared 5 Sure Fire Fun-Suckers, things that make books boring.  Today I will discus the first of three Page-Turner Techniques that are sure to make your work in progress a "can't-put-it-down" book.

#1. SHORTER CHAPTERS

Seems obvious, doesn't it? But the truth is that you will simply lose many readers after just a few pages. How many times have you opened a book and counted the pages in a particular chapter to see if you really felt like committing yourself to it?  Chances are if the chapter was too long, you put the book down and reached for something else.

Pick up a few books you consider "page-turners." Chances are most of them have pretty short chapters. For example, Dan Brown's The DaVinci Code has chapters as short as a single page. The overall length of two books may be exactly the same, but the fact remains that short chapters achieve two very important things for your reader:

Creates the illusion of a "fast read."

Increases the likelihood that the reader 
will read multiple chapters in a single sitting.

When asked about whether or not the act of reading books is in danger of giving way to electronic media, Author Hernan Casciari said the following: 

“What’s important right now is our lack of concentration, 

our inability to be able to read, listen or write for more than 20 minutes."

Actually, Casciari hit the nail on the head, and here's why. 

In 2012, the Associated Press published research revealing that the attention span of the average person (adult or child) is a mere 8 second. 8 seconds!!! That's how long you have to capture your readers' attention--and KEEP IT!

To give you an idea of what we're up against, in the year 2000 the average attention span was 12 seconds, and the attention span of a goldfish is 9 seconds.

Now, we can bemoan the damage to our brains caused by video games and TV shows all we want, but as writers we need to look at this information through different lenses. Our readers' attention spans are shrinking. So the question is not how do we stop this, but how can best reach our readers on their level?

Try It Out!

If you are working on a manuscript right now, try these tweaks to help make your story more "bite-sized."

1.  Write chapters that are between 3 - 5 pages.

2.  Divide longer chapters into two or more shorter chapters.

3.  Utilize Framing Devices to separate scenes within a longer chapter.
                           -White Space (add an extra blank line between scenes)
                           -Varied Font (use italics to identify quotes, different forms of text such as journal entries or letters, or for dreams, flash backs, etc.)
                           -Asterisks (can be used within white space to separate scenes)

Come back next Friday for the 2nd Page-Turner Technique!