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The Long Rest:
It’s For the Best!
Guest post by
Jennifer Tzivia MacLeod
How do you feel about your stories once they’re
written? Do you read every word in
adoration, or glance away from the screen so you don’t have to look at it? Some writers are totally in love with their
manuscript the minute it’s finished.
Others can’t stand it; they’re simply sick of the thing.
Which one are you?
Whichever group you’re in, or if you fall somewhere in
between, there’s one thing you should do when you finish your story. Set it aside for the Long Rest.
How do you make tea?
You probably don’t just dip the teabag in the water and pull it out. You have to let it steep for a while or else
the water has no taste. Same with your
story: you have to let it steep.
Take me, for example.
I’m in the second group. The
minute I finish a story, I can’t even bear to look at it. I feel like I’ve been wallowing with it in
the mud and I’m eager to get out and wash off my feet.
So I do. I get right
out of that story and let it sit somewhere for all that mud to dry.
But even if you’re totally in love with your story, the Long
Rest is important. Even if you want to
spend all your waking hours preening over each word, put it down and distract
yourself. Walk away. Write something else. Let it steep.
How long should you stay away?
I can’t tell you that, but it should feel like a long
time. Maybe that means two weeks; maybe
two months. I had a collection of short
stories I stayed away from for ten years until I found it on my hard drive again.
Since self-publishing is so easy, it can be tempting to
write the thing, run a spell-check or hire a cheap editor, and then put it out as
a Kindle book. (In fact, if you hire an
editor, even a cheap one, you’ll be well ahead of most Kindle writers out
there!)
That’s not enough.
In a traditional publishing company, many eyes will read
your story; many hands will make changes.
Since you don’t have a large staff, you must be those eyes, those
hands. And the only way to do that is to
give yourself time.
When you come back to your story after the Long Rest, you’ll
be renewed and recharged. You’ll see it
in a new way. Its good points and bad
points will be clearer, its rough edges and shining moments more apparent than
they were when you were immersed. You’re
ready (at last) to start self-editing.
You know it’s been long enough when you open up a story and say,
“I wrote this???” You may say it in
wonder, or maybe in disgust.
With your new objectivity, you’ll also be a better editor of
your own story.
Reading the story again as an editor, you’ll feel free to
change anything. You might discover that
that scene description you were so in love with just a few weeks or months
before is actually kind of tedious. Or
you might even surprise yourself. Maybe
that dialogue that felt so clunky as you slogged through writing is actually
kind of poignant.
But none of that can happen without the Long Rest.
None of us is a perfect writer or editor and, more
importantly, none of us is both simultaneously.
Give yourself a break. Take the
time that you need. Let your story
steep. Then slip out of writing mode and
slide on that editor hat, sharpening your red pencil to make your (well-rested)
story as perfect as it can be.
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Jennifer Tzivia MacLeod is a freelance writer and blogger
who lives in northern Israel. She’s
written over twelve books for kids along with two books for authors: The
Seven Day Manuscript Machine: Edit your children's book to genius in only a
week and Writing the Bible
for Children: How to write blazing Biblical
stories and picture books for kids.
Make your own writing dreams come true at Write Kids’ Books.
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